Kamis, 16 Januari 2014

My Beloved in Paradise Seasons II ( Not yet Complete )



MY BELOVED IN PARADISE
SEASONS II
On that time , The Junior’s secret have been revealed by Tiara . That think make Ayu and the others upset !
“ What !! It’s true ! This insignia only Junior’s whos have it ! “ says Susi really surprised .
“ Why , why are you Junior doing something like this ?! “ ask Ayu and the other upset . “ The reasons is simple . He’s wanted to get along with you , Ayu ! and of course , he’s wanted to secret his identity so I’m cannot find him ! “ says Tiara .
“ What , are it’s true , Handy . . ? I mean Junior ?! “ ask Ayu shocked .
“ Y . . Yes , Ayu . I’m secret my identity so , I could get along with you ! “ says Handy scared . “ You’re so cunning , Junior ! You’ve deceived all of us ! “ says Ayu’s mad . “ Ayu , forgive me ! Please . . please ! “ says Handy begging for forgiveness .
Finally Ayu’s slapped Junior’s face .
“ Better we get outta here , let’s those people solve their problem , themselves . Problems between his and his  little sister ! “ says Ayu’s mad . “ Yes , let’s get outta here ! “ says Susi and the others whos looked upset to Junior and then they’all gone .
“ You’ve satisfied , Tiara ?! “ insult Junior mad .  “ Hm , not . I’m didn’t satisfy with all of this , yet ?! Have you’ve a idea how can I be satisfied , big brother ?! “ mock Tiara . “ You’re so cunning , Tiara . Ok , I will playing on you’re role of games . And which one between us whos gonna to win ! “ says Junior . “ Oh , you’re so kind , brother . Remember that Elen has under my control . Until whenever , you wouldn’t save her . Bye bye ! “ mock Tiara and then she’s leave .
“ Damn , she’s so cunning . Now what’s must I do ?! “ damn Junior . “ Oh yea . I’ve a solutions . Why didn’t I asking help from old friends ! “ says Junior and then he’s leave .
Meanwhile on Elen’s house .
“ Hi , Astrid ! How come ?! “ mock Elen’s hypnotized . “ Elen , let’s me go ! “ says Astrid . “ Oh , sorry . I can’t do this ! my master surely will angry with me if I let’s you’re pass ! “ mock Elen’s hypnotized . “ You’re mean , that’s the most cunning girl , like Tiara is , little brothers of Junior’s right ?! “ insult Astrid . “ You’d damn right . Don’t insult my master in front of my eyes again ! “ threat Elen’s hypnotized . “  Oh , why ?! are you’re discredit with me , then ?! “ mock Astrid . “ No . . absolutely not ! “ says Elen’s hypnotized . “ Oh yea ? we’re spies . So I could understand what’ve inside you’re heart , Elen . So let’s me go , for old times sake ! “ says Astrid .
“ Are you trying to provoc me , Astrid ?! “  Ask Elen hypnotized . “ No , no . What’s for ?! “ says Astrid . “ Hufh . Elen , come closer ! I have something to talk to you now ! “ says Astrid . “ What’s up ?! “ ask Elen hypnotized and then move closer to Astrid .
And then , Astrid knock her down .
“ Haha . I’m successful make you fooled , Elen ! “ laugh Astrid and then straight go out of Elen’s house . “ Astrid , thank you . You’ve did this ,and make me conscious again ! “ thank Elen .
Meanwhile on Handy . I mean Junior .
“ Hi , Handy ! “ greet Hera , Miftakhul Rahmat(often be called Mamat) , and Syaiful Ma’arif(often be called Ipul) .
“ Don’t call that name again . All of planned have been lost ! Now call me Junior , like back then ! “ says Junior .
“ What’s up , Junior ?! “ ask Hera . “ Tiara . She’s destroyed all of my planned and reveal my true identity to Ayu and the others ! “ says Junior . “ What ! Actually what’s your business with Tiara , you’re little sister then ?! “ ask Ipul . “ She consider that I’m whos kill the fathers . What nonsense , I didn’t doing something like that ! “ says Junior . “ I know . I’ve heard that she was joined to a grup gangstars , named themselves ‘ The Hatred ‘ right ?! “ ask Hera . “ Yes . Unfortunately ! “ says Junior depressed . “ What ! So her the only one whos make those gangstars upper of those ranks ! “ says Mamat . “ Maybe ! “ says Junior . “ If so , you’re and the others now have a great problem indeed ! “ says Hera . “ looked like it ! “ says Junior .
Meanwhile on Ayu’s house .
“ I don’t believe he’s do such thing to me ! “ says Ayu upset . “ Calm down , Ayu ! You’ve been feeling mad since yesterday . Aren’t it will effect your illness ?! “ ask Susi . “ I am just don’t believe if Junior does still alive ! “ says Ayu upset . “ Ayu , doesn’t that news will make you happy ?! “ ask Erna . “ I am . But the way he’s doing which make me upset ! “ says Ayu upset .
Suddenly Astrid come to Ayu’s house .
“ AA . . Ayu . I wanted to talk to you ! “ says Astrid exhausted . “ Astrid , where are you been ?! “ ask Ayu and the others . “ I will tell you all . But first give me a drink ! “ says Astrid exhausted . “ Here ! “ says Ratna with give a glass of water to Astrid and then Astrid drink it . “ Now , what are you wanted to saying to me ?! “ ask Ayu . “ few days ago , I’m cannot goes to school to tell you all about this , ‘cause I’m were kidnapped by Elen ! “ says Astrid . “ What !! How come ? Elen wouldn’t doing something like this . Elen are the kind person , you’ve know ! “ says Ayu disbelieve . “ Yes , I’m understand . She was hypnotized by a woman , named Tiara . “ What ! are you sure ?! “ ask Ayu and the other surprised . “ Yes , I’m sure . furthermore , I know who’re Handy’s anyway . He’s Junior ! “ says Astrid . “ Yes , we’re already know about this ! “ says Ayu . “ Who has told you about this ?! “ ask Astrid curiously . “ Tiara whos told all about this , and Handy’s confess it ! “ says Erna . “ Your are incredible stupid . How could you’re broke our friendship just for something like that ?! “ says Astrid mad . “ Listen , all of you . Junior does it ‘cause he’s wanna to protect your are from Tiara , your know ! “ says Astrid . “ But . . ?! “ says Ayu . “ Ok . I will tell your one thing . Actually , Tiara’s target are to broke our friendship and changed up with hatred to Junior . She wanted to provoc all of us to hates each other , so that Junior’s can felt whatever what is feeling by Tiara ! in short , she’s wanna to take avenged to Junior ‘cause her fathers dies ! “ explain Astrid . “ Are you’re saying is true , Astrid ?! “ ask Erna . “ Yes , I’m saying it true ! “ says Astrid .
Meanwhile on Junior .
“ So , what are we gonna do now ?! “ ask Mamat . “ Yes , Junior . What are we gonna do now ?! “ says Hera . “ Best now , we’ll stay on playing her role first , and then we’ll stab her from behind ! “ says Junior . “ But , it’s so riskfully ! “ says Ipul .
Suddenly Tiara come to Junior .
“ Wah . . Wah . My brother has gained aid from his old friends , didn’t he ?! “ mock Tiara . “ Tiara . . !! “ says Junior and his friends surprised . “ Tiara , what are doing here ?! “ ask Junior surprised . “ Oh , don’t be so surprised , my big brother . I’m here ‘cause I wanted to deliver this letter to you ! “ mock Tiara . “ What it is ?! “ ask Junior curiously . “ We’re mother have returned from France . She ordered you to go home now ! “ mock Tiara . “ Shit , you must the only one whos told mother about this , right ?! “ says Junior . “ Hm , you right , brother . “ says Tiara cold .
“ What now , Junior ?! “ ask Hera .
“ I don’t know yet . But better we play on her role first ! “ says Junior . “ Are you sure about this ? “ ask Syaiful . “ I don’t have any choices now . “ says Junior . “ But , Junior . If you’d be home now , you’ll get punished by your mother ! “ says Mamat . “ Don’t worry about that . I’m pretty sure that my Mom is kind more than Tiara ! “ says Junior smiled . “ Are you spoke weird of me ?! “ ask Tiara curiously . “ Ok , I will go home now ! guys . farewell ! “ farewell Junior and then Junior and Tiara leave .
Meanwhile back to Ayu’s house
“ But , what the reason , he lies to us ?! “ ask Ayu mad . “ Oh , no . Although you’re smartest on school , but you’re so stupid , Ayu . He wanted to protect all of you . Because he think that if the gangstars named ‘ The Hatred ‘ came , our friendship of all of the brotherhood will vanish and be charge by hatred to our friendship . “ says Astrid . “ So , what are we gonna do now ? “ ask Erna and Ratna . “ There is no other way , except to unity Senior gangstars and together chase away Tiara from our school . “ says Astrid with take a deep breath . “ But if we do that , Junior will be very unpleasant with this and Tiara rage will even more smolder !! “ says Ayu surprised . “ Do not be so naïve , Ayu .This is the only chance to ending this big problem . “ says Astrid . “ Ok , I’ll agree . “ says Ayu agree . “ Good . But first we must meet with someone ! “ says Astrid . “ What ? Who ? “ ask Susi curiously . “ Hm m , Lisa and Vivi ! “ says Astrid . “ What !! She’s does hate Ayu . How could be she both could land a hand to help we’all ?! “ ask Susi and the other surprised . “ She’s both will help us , absolutely . “ says Astrid confidently . “ What makes you think that ?! “ ask Ayu . “ You’ve know , right ? That Lisa and Vivi ever fall for love with Junior . If we told them the truth that Junior doesn’t die , I’m sure those witch would gladly to help us ! “ says Astrid smiled .

“ Are you sure , Astrid ?! “ ask Susi . “ Yes , definitely ! “ says Astrid confidently .
Meanwhile on Junior and Tiara’s scene .
“ Junior , how come ?! “ greet Umam . “ Umam , what are you doing here ?! “ ask Junior and Tiara surprised . “ Junior , how come with all your planned ?! “ ask Umam cold . “ Plan ? What plan ?! “ ask Junior . “ The plan , to get along with Ayu , of course ! “ says Umam cold . “ Better you ask someone beside me ! “ says Junior . “ All my brother plan were run out ! “ says Tiara cold . “ Who are you ? Of course you’re Tiara ! “ says Umam . “ Yes , and I’m was the only one whos falling my brother plan ! “ says Tiara cold .” What !! That’s impossible indeed ! “ says Umam surprised . “ Hmph , really surprising , didn’t it ?! “ mock Tiara . “ Hmp , didn’t really surprising ! That’s the reason till today you haven’t a boyfriend to like you , Tiara ! “ insult Umam . “ Didn’t you whos ignored around here , Umam ? even you haven’t a girlfriend to like you ! “ reply Tiara cold . “ What !! do you insult me , Tiara ?! “ says Umam irritating . “ Aren’t you whos started it yet ?! “ says Tiara cold . “ Enough . Better both of you end your conversations ! “ order Junior . “ Brother , I’ll go home first ! “ says Tiara cold and then she’s go home .
Meanwhile on Supermarket near the place of Junior and Umam having conversations .
“ Hm , Dita . Don’t help me too much ! “ says Mela . “ Mela , I’m ever swear to your parents that I will protect you all of time and wherever ! “ says Dita . “ Hm , but you’ve overdoing this ! “ says Mela smiled .

Rabu, 15 Januari 2014

Introduce about this novel

My Beloved in Paradise
( Jodohku ada di Surga )

My Beloved in Paradise is a novel which written by a man , named Muhammad Badrul Umam on 12 September 2013 AD . In this story , the written tried to writtened a story which very incredible story ever seen . 

There's a lot characters whos have a bad behavior which laid on Gemilang's Senior High School whos have big problem after lost of Junior , the leader of Senior's gangstars . The big problem wasn't solved itself , instead even increased after Lisa , one of Ayu's best friends broke up her friendship with her . Also , on the gangstars itself , were led by a guy named Danang , Ryan , and Farkan whos doesn't have intellegence to lead those gangstars well , so that , he has a lot of enemies with targetted them as a easy prey .

Ayu , the former member of Senior's gangstars were stucked by her friend , named Lisa whos really hate her so much , but even so , Ayu doesn't wanna to anger with her and instead she trying to reconsider the friendship again with Lisa . 

Few months later , arriving a man , named Handy . He's was handsome so many of girl were fall for love with him . In fact , all of those didn't know that Handy' are Junior whos have incognito his identity to spying over that gangstars and find out what would wrong within those gangstars and school . 

Vivi , one of Darti friends were so hated Ayu so much . Even when she's met each other was always have a fight going on . The luckly is Ayu were bearing one of the Junior ring so Vivi and the others doesn't dare to attack Ayu on all of the way . Junior's give Ayu his ring 'cause He believe that Ayu would have a big problem after he's dead . And actually what is worried by Junior come true , after Junior passed away , all the member of Senior gangstars wanted to get rid of Ayu .

Luckly , someone named Handy came . He was handsome person so many girl were fall for love with him , also he has heroic characteristic so he could save Ayu's and his other friends as well from chaos which has happened through the school .

But there's some biggest problem whos had happened . The gangstars , named ' The Hatred ' were come and trying sabotase and destroy Senior gangstars and Gemilang Senior High School . " Those gangstars were lead by a ambitions and avenged man , named Sugeng Riyadi . He trying to provoc Tiara , whos Junior little sister to destroy all of them and changed by hatred ! Whos know , what future will bring Senior gangstars .

My Beloved in Paradise Season I Part 3


 Tomorrow on the way of school
“ Hey , Handy . good morning ! “ greet Ayu .
“ . . . . “ nothing come from Handy’s mouth .
“ Handy !! “ call Ayu louder .
“ I don’t wanna to befriends with you again ! Now get out of my sight !! “ says Handy mad . “ Oh so . Thus you’ve been angry to me ‘cause that little problem yesterday on Danang’s party , right ?!! “ ask Ayu mad . “ Little problem , you say ?! You’ve been broken up our’s friendship , you’ve know now ! “ says Handy mad . “ Handy . . I didn’t mean to . . ! “ says Ayu whos cut by Handy . “ Mean to what ? to broke our’s friendships . Ayu . . Ayu , I didn’t believe about what has you’ve says to me now ! “ says Handy mad . “ Ok , if that’s you wanted . Don’t talk or meet me again !! “ says Ayu mad and then she’s left .
On the school
“ Hi , Handy ! “ greet Elen .
“ Hi , what’s up ?! “ ask Handy .
“ Let’s us go elsewhere ! “ says Elen .
On a place .
“ Hi , guys . You’ve been here too , actually ! “ says Handy . “ Oh yea ! “ says Elen and her friends . “ Handy , why’re you alone ? usually you’ve been together with Ayu ?! “ ask Dewi . “ Oh , she ? I am didn’t met her today ! “ says Handy . “ Are you have problem with her lately ?! “ ask Dewi curiously . “ No , no ! “ says Handy nerveous .
Suddenly Astrid come out and kidnapped Handy .
“ Astrid , what are you done to me actually ? “ ask Handy .
“ I’m wanna to talk something with you , Handy ! “ says Astrid .
“ About what ?! “ ask Handy . “ Are you sure that Ayu get along with Danang ? “ ask Astrid . “ Of course , she is alone whos told about this ! “ says Handy . “ Oh my god ! you’re really that idiots ! “ says Astrid . “ What do you mean by that ?! “ ask Handy curiously . “ Listen , Handy ! Ayu didn’t doing that on purpose . She done that ‘cause she’s have been threated by Danang and Lisa ! “ says Astrid . “ How do you know all of this ?! “ ask Handy curiously . “ Huft . Handy , I ever be friend with Ayu back then . I’ve know all about Ayu more than you , Handy ! “ says Astrid . “ And now ? why are you disecret your own secret then ?! “ ask Handy .
“ Nothing . I am just overheard this , so I intend to help you on one way or the other ! “ says Astrid nerveously . “ But , me and Ayu are enmity now ! “ says Handy depressed . “ How come ? “ ask Astrid . “ Because I’m have ever says that I’m didn’t wanna to met Ayu again ! “ says Handy depressed . “ What !! “ You’re stupid indeed . You’ve let’s you’re enemy won , you know that !! “ says Astrid surprised . “ Now better you look where’s Ayu is and pardon to her ! “ says Astrid . “ You’re right , but ? “ says Handy . “ You ought know that Ayu doing that for you and for all of her friends , you know that . She do it so that you and her own precious friends didn’t been roughed up by Danang and his buddies ! “ says Astrid . “ What !! that’s impossible ! She didn’t mean to do that ! “ says Handy surprised . “ Yeah , better you get pardon to her ! “ order Astrid . “ By the way , what are your reason you’re help me today ? “ ask Handy . “ Ok , I am telling the truth , I’m hate with someone , named Danang and Ryan ! “ says Astrid truth . “ Why . . ? “ ask Handy curiously . “ That’s enough . I shall tell you one day , but not now . farewell Handy ! “ says Astrid and then leave .
Back to classroom , Handy was told everything that could happen to Elen and the others .
“ hey , guest ! “ call Handy louder . “ What’s up , Handy ?! “ ask Susi and the others . “ I’ve something important to tell you all ! “ says Handy . “ What is it ?! “ ask Elen curiously . “ You know that Ayu do that to we , ‘cause she didn’t want we’ll be roughed up by Danang and his buddies ! “ explain Handy . “ What !! are you sure about this , Handy ?! “ ask Erna and the others was surprised hearing about that . “ Yes , I’m sure . “ says Handy . “ So we’re been deceived by Danang and Lisa then ?! “ ask Susi . “ Yes , unfortunately ! “ says Handy .  “ Better you all must get pardon from Ayu now ! “ says Dewi . “ Yes , absolutely ! “ says Handy and the others .
Meanwhile on the school garden , where’s Ayu usually wasted of her time .
“ Whether , the decisions I was make , was absolutely wrong ?! “ ask Ayu on her own heart .
“ Junior , I am needed you now ! “ says Ayu on her own heart .
Finally she’s nostalgic about she’s past when she was Junior on her side .
“ Hi , Ayu ! “ greet Junior .
“ Hi , Junior . Why’re you here ? “ ask Ayu .
“ Oh , Iam just come by here and saw you , thus I come here then ! “ says Junior . “ Doesn’t Lisa would be jealous if she saw you’re here with me ? “ ask Ayu . “ Oh , don’t mention she to me , Ayu ! “ says Junior . “ Why , aren’t Lisa was your girlfriend ?! “ ask Ayu . “ Says who ? I’m never saying something like that ! “ says Junior . “ Ayu , I wanted told you about something ! “ says Junior with smiled . “ What is it ?! “ ask Ayu curiously . “ I love with you , Ayu . Do you love me either ?! “ ask Junior smiled . “ What ! you’ve know that I’m have a boyfriend now , named Richard . Why you’re saying something like that now ?! “ says Ayu surprised . “ Whatever now . Iam sure that you’re will saying ‘ I love you too ‘ someday , Ayu ! “ says Junior smiled . “ Junior . . you’re ! “ says Ayu . “ Ok , now . I need to move to somewhere , will you come with me ? “ ask Junior .  “ Where exactly is ? “ ask Ayu curiously . “ Just follow me ! “ order Junior . “ Ok , let’s go ! “ says Ayu and then they both gone to classroom .
On classroom
“ Hi , Junior ! “ greet Lisa .
“ Oh Lisa . It’s time for breakfast , why are you aren’t go to cantin or library or wherever ! “ ask Junior . “ I wanted to . . but I wouldn’t waste anytime to greet my dearest Junior ! “ says Lisa brushed . “ Whatever . Oh yea , where’s Vivi , Darti , Elen, and everyone now ? “ ask Junior . “ Why on this time when we’re just both of me and you , you’re wasting we’re time asking someone whos not important ?! “ ask Lisa little fury . “ I have something was needed to told to all of you ! “ says Junior .
Suddenly , Vivi , Elen , Darti was reach the meeting point , including Danang , Kevin , Farkan , Irvan , Ryan , and the others as well .
“ Hi , Junior , and the witch , named Lisa ! “ mock Vivi . “ What ! You’re saying that I am are witch . You’re the witch !! “ Insult Lisa . “ That’s enough . Lisa and Vivi ! actually both of you were are the witchs ! “ mock Darti . “ What ! What are you just saying to me ?!! “ ask Vivi and Lisa with little of mad . “ That’s enough of this ! Listen to we’re all leader ! “ says Elen . “ Ok . . ok ! “ says Vivi , Lisa , and Darti frightened .
Meanwhile on this outside of classroom
“ Hi , who are you ?! “ ask Susi .
“ Oh , my name is Ayu . By the way , who are you ? “ says Ayu . “ My name is Susi . You’re must be a new student whos talking about , right ?! “ ask Susi . “ Talking about what ? “ ask Ayu curiously .  “ Talking about who has smartest and most beautiful girl ever existed in this school ! “ praise Susi . “ What ! That’s nonsense . I’m not someone smartest  and someone that beautiful ! “ says Ayu shy and brushed . “ Oh , You’re a girl whos have type of mousiy . Even you’re didn’t recognize you’re self . But whatever , could you befriend with me then ?! “ says Susi hopeful . “ You . . you’re wanna befriend with me ?! “ ask Ayu surprised . “ Yes , why ? “ ask Susi . “ Oh , why not ! I could use a friend ! “ says Ayu smiled . “ Good , by the way why are you here , in outside of OSIS rooms ? “ ask Susi curiously . “ Oh , nothing ! “ says Ayu . “ Ok then , if you’re says so . I be willing to introduce three of my best friends . Follow me now ! “ says Susi with hold Ayu’s hand and then they both leave .
Meanwhile on OSIS rooms after left of Ayu and Susi .
“ Ok , then . I shall introduce we’re new gang member ! “ says Junior . “ Who is it ?! “ ask everyone on OSIS rooms . “ Wait , I’ll be called her ! “ says Junior with called Ayu but there’s no answer . “ What happened ?? “ ask Junior . “ Better I must go search her ! “ says Junior . “ Meanwhile , you all can go to your own class now ! “ order Junior . “ Ok then ! “ says everyone .
“ Better I go to classroom now . I have something to tell to Ayu ! “ says Lisa . “ Who is Ayu , Lisa ?! “ ask Vivi curiously . “ She’s a new student whos has so smartest on we’re school . She is also one of my best friends , Vivi ! “ says Lisa . “ Oh , it’s that so . Well then I will be moving out now ! “ says Vivi and then leave .
Meanwhile on classroom .
“ Hi , Susi . you’ve back ! “ greet Astrid and Ratna . “ Yes , I will introduce a new friends to all of you . She is enter this school few days ago . Says Mr . Bus , she’s enter this school without any test , ‘cause she is most smartest and skillful about our’s studies subject ! “ says Susi . “ Whaow . That’s fantastic . There’s no one whos ever passed that way on my school before ! “ praise Astrid . “ Who is it ?! “ ask Ratna curiously . “ Don’t ask more . Ayu came here then ! “ order Susi and then Ayu enter the classroom .
“ My name is Ayu ! I am are new student here . I entered this school few days ago . “ introduce Ayu with so nervous . “ Ayu , she says . . ! “ says Astrid on her own heart . “ Oh , I’ve heard about you on Lisa , she always talking about you ! “ says Ratna . “ Oh really ?! “ ask Ayu . “ Yes , she’s do ! “ says Ratna . “ By the way , my name is Ratna ! “ introduce Ratna . “ Oh , and I’m are Astrid , nice to meet you too ! “ introduce Astrid with smiled . “ Yes , nice to me you too ! “ says Ayu smiled .
And then Lisa finally reach the class room .
“ Hi , guys ! “ greet Lisa .
“ Lisa , what’s you’re discussion are finish yet ? “ ask Ayu . “ Ayu , thus you’ve been here actually . “ says Lisa surprised . “ Yes , I’m just introduce with Ratna , Astrid , and Susi ! “ says Ayu smiled . “ Oh ya , Ayu . I wanna to invite you to sprint race tomorrow ! “ says Susi . “ Yes , but ! “ says Ayu . “ Susi , I wanna to talk to you now ! “ says Lisa with hold Susi’s hand and then go elsewhere .
“ What it is for , Lisa ? You’re suddenly force me to go with you to outside of classroom ! “ says Susi irritated . “ Susi , I want to tell you something about Ayu ! “ says Lisa . “ What’s about ?! “ ask Susi . “ Ayu . . Ayu have a grave illness , you know ! “ says Lisa sad . “ What . . that’s impossible ! “ says Susi disbelieve . “ What kind of illness ?! “ ask Susi disbelieve . “ She has pleurisy illness on stage two ! “ says Lisa sad . “ What !! How do you know all of this ?! “ says Susi surprised . “ I ever invite Ayu to singing contest together with Junior and Richard . When she’s will to show , she suddenly insensible . When me and Junior also Richard brought her to nearly hospital , the doctor says badnews  . Badnews which tell we’re both that Ayu have pleurisy illness on stage two ! “ says Lisa sad . “ What !! So if we invite her in sprint race , she will . . ! “ says Susi sad . “ Yes , absolutely ! “ says Lisa .
“ Susi , Lisa . Where are you been ?! “ ask Ayu whos search both of those .
“ Yes , Ayu . We’ll be there ! “ says Lisa and Susi and then they back to Ayu .
“ Both of you , where you’ve been ? “ ask Astrid . “ Oh , We’re just come outside to discuss about something else ! “ says Lisa . “ How about it , Susi ? Did you still wanna to invite me on sprint race tomorrow ?! “ ask Ayu . “ No , I’m sorry Ayu ! “ pardon Susi . “ Did she figure out about my grave illness yet ?! “  ask Ayu on her own heart .
Finally the lesson began .
“ Ok , students . I will introduce myself to you . My name is Mrs . Lilik Cholifah , often be called Mrs . Lilik , and she’s are my assistant , named Mrs . Wida ! “ introduce Mrs . Lilik to Ayu . “ Hi , nice to meet you ! “ says Mrs . Wida . “ I’m introduce myself and Mrs . Wida ‘cause there’s a new student here . Whos you’re name  , pretty girl ?! “ says Mrs . Lilik . “ My name is Ayu . I move to this school four days ago , ma’am ! “ says Ayu smiled . “ Nice to meet you , Ayu ! “ says Mrs Lilik and Mrs Wida smiled . “ Yes , me too ! “ says Ayu smiled .
Finally , Ayu conscious from she’s nostalgic , ‘cause she’s be called by Handy .
“ Ayu . . ! “ call Handy louder .
“ Handy , what are he’s doing here ?! “ ask Ayu on her own heart and then leave .
“ Ayu , are you still angry to me ?! “ ask Handy on he’s own heart .
Meanwhile on Ayu’s path .
“ . . . ! “ nothing come from Ayu’s mouth .
“ How are you doing , my friend ! “ greet Susi .
“ Susi , what are you doing here ?! “ ask Ayu . “ Oh , I just sit around here and watch my best friend couldn’t forgive  a man whos also one of my best friends either ! “ says Susi . “ Do you mean , Handy ?! “ ask Ayu cold . “ So you’ve understand that’s all ! “ mock Susi . “ Did ever I tell you that you’all are useless to me now ! “ says Ayu cold . “ Oh , I’m know that you’re not saying that on purpose ! “ says Astrid whos suddenly come out from hideout . “ Astrid , how do you know all of this ?! “ ask Ayu curiously . “ Because , I’ve introgate the witch , Lisa ! “ says Astrid cold . “ So you’re the only one whos told Handy and the others about it ?! “ ask Ayu curiously . “ Yes , I do ! “ says Astrid cold . “ How do you . . ?! “ ask Ayu . “ Hm , ‘ how do you want to help me ‘ right ?! I’m help you ‘cause I felt so touched when you’ve been slap Richard to avenged my Handy ! I felt indebted to you ! “ says Astrid cold . “ Now as the payment , you must forgive Handy and the others of your best friends ! “ says Astrid cold . “ No , I didn’t wanna to do that ! “ says Ayu . “ Oh , well if that what you’re wanted ! I’ll be go then ! “ says Astrid and then leave .
“ Ayu . . Ayu please forgive me and befriend again with me and the others as well ! “ Susi begging . “ Sorry Susi , I wanted to forgive all of you , but I can’t . . ! “ says Ayu depressed and then leave . “ Ayu , please Ayu . . forgive me !! “ scream Susi . “ . . . . “ nothing come from Ayu’s mouth but she’d shed of her tears . “ Ayu , you’re crying ! “ says Susi on her own heart and smiled . “ I know Ayu , You’re still wanna befriend with me and the others as well ! “ says Susi smiled . “ . . . . “ nothing come from Ayu’s mouth but she’s still crying . “ We’ll waiting you’re always Ayu ! “ says Susi smiled . “ . . . . “ nothing come from Ayu’s mouth but she’s still crying and then run away .
“ Susi , how come ? did Ayu forgive us ?! “ ask Handy . “ No , not yet ! “ says Susi smiled . “ Eh , why are you smiled , Susi ?! “ ask Handy . “ ‘cause I’m have know that she still wanna befriend with our’s again . But not now ! “ says Susi smiled .
Tomorrow , on the way to school , Elen was surrounded by a gangstars member , named ‘ The Hatred ‘
“ Who are you , anyway ?! “ ask Elen surprised .
“ I don’t wanna answer you’re question , Elen ! “ says a girl .
  But I’ll tell you that I’m are one of the gangstars member , named ‘ The Hatred ‘ ! “ says a girl . “ What ! You’re little girl are the member of gangstars , named ‘ The Hatred ‘ !! “ says Elen surprised . “ from informant that I’ve know , that you’re the only one whos know wherever Junior is ! “ says a girl . “ Whos you’re informant then ?! “ ask Elen curiously . “ Kevin . You’ve meet him , right ?! “ says a girl cold . “ What !! I don’t believe this ! “ says Elen surprised .
Meanwhile on a distance
“ Elen , whos that girl ?! “ ask Astrid surprised .
“ What !! I know her , she is one of the member of gangstars , named ‘ The Hatred ‘ !! “ says Astrid .
“ I cannot hear a thing from this distance . Better I overheard within getting close to them ! “ says Astrid .
Meanwhile on Elen scene .
“ Kevin , are you informant ?!! “ ask Elen surprised . “ Yes , he do ! “ says a girl cold . “ What do you want from me , then ?! “ ask Elen . “ Tell me , where’s Junior is ! “ says a girl cold . “ I . . I don’t know ! “ says Elen nervous . “ I know that you’re lied to me ! You’re one of the Junior’s best spy agent , right ?! “ says a girl cold . “ I’ve mention it . Erna says few days later , there’s will come a bunch of spies . They call themselves ‘ The Hatred ‘ But I didn’t mention it so quickly ! “ says Elen on her own heart . “ Now tell me , where’s my big brother now !! “ order a girl cold . “ What !! You’re big brother ?? So you’re Tiara , right ?!! “ ask Elen surprised . “ Yes , Iam are Tiara ! “ says Tiara . “ I thought you’re so cute and kind back then ! “ says Elen . “ Two years has passed , Elen . I’ve became like this ‘cause my big brother have abandoned me ! “ says Tiara . “ What !! isn’t true ! “ says Elen . “ Whatever ! Today I will avenged to my big brothers with your , Elen ! “ says Tiara . “ What !! That’s impossible . I wouldn’t betray Junior for a second time ! “ says Elen . “ Elen , didn’t you’ve know that I’m are specialist of hypnotic ! Guys catch her up now ! “ says Tiara .
Finally the two Tiara’s buddies successful to catch up Elen .
“ You couldn’t do this to me !! “ says Elen rebelling .
“ Elen , look to me ! In  few second you’ll be obeying all of my orders ! “ hypnotic Tiara . “ Yes ! I will obeying all of your orders ! “ says Elen is hypnotized . “ Now I’m order you to telling me the truth . Aren’t Junior still alive or not ?! “ ask Tiara . “ Yes , he’s alive . But he’s on incognito now ! “ says Elen is hypnotized . “ What , what are he’s name now ?! “ ask Tiara . “ He’s name now are Handy ! “ says Elen is hypnotized . “ Oh , He’s just take the first name of his full name ‘ Handy Junior ‘ . long time ago , he’s called Junior , and now he’s called Handy . How funny is it ! “ says Tiara smiled . “ Ok , now . Elen you’ve work to do ! “ says Tiara . “ What is it ?! “ ask Elen is hypnotized . “ You must be my spies then . And continue you’re mission on Gemilang’s Senior High School ! “ order Tiara . “ And You’ll telling everything what’s has happening to Handy and the other to me ! “ order Tiara . “ Yes , I’ll do it ! “ says Elen is hypnotized .
Meanwhile on Astrid scene . When she’s hide to overheard the conversation between them .
“ What ! Handy’ is Junior !! “ says Astrid on her own heart .
“ Its bad news indeed . Better I’ll report this to Handy’ and the other ! “ says Astrid on her own heart .
“ Look who we have here . A spies too ! “ says Tiara . “ What , how did you know that I’ve been spies on you ?! “ ask Astrid surprised . “ Oh , I’m supposed luck , maybe ! “ mock Tiara . “ How supposed that is it Luck ! No one ever know when I’m spying him . No one , except you ! “  says Astrid . “ Oh well . Guys catch her up ! “ order Tiara .
Finally Tiara’buddies have successful catch up Astrid .
“ Shit ! “ damn Astrid .
“ Elen , I wanted you to brought her to your own house and don’t let her escape ! “ order Tiara . “ Yes , I will do it ! “ says Elen is hypnotized .
Finally , Astrid was kidnapped and be brought to Elen’s house . Tomorrow .
“ Good morning , students . Today , we’re arrival few of new students . Please come in ! “ says Mr . Bus .
“ Good morning , all . Introducing , My name is Lina ! “ introducing Lina with smiled .
“ Good morning , all . Introducing , My name is Rini ! “ introducing Rini with smiled .
“ Good morning , all . Introducing , My name is Tiara ! “ introducing Tiara with smiled .
“ Ok , Tiara’s is Junior’little sister . Unfortunately , Junior was passed away , so he’s can’t see his little sister are grown beauty like this ! “ says Mr . Bus .
“ There’s must be something till she came in ! As far I know , that’s Junior’s little sister are so hates , Junior so much , ‘cause the tragedy back then when Junior’s father were passed away ! “ says Ayu , Susi , Ratna , and Lisa on her own heart .
“ Did you come , just for avenged to me after you’re suggested that I’m whos only reason we’re father dies ! “ says Handy on his own heart .
“ Ok , now ! Lina , and Rini . You could sit on Dewi and Herlina , there ! “ order Mr . Bus . “ Yes , sir ! “ says Lina and Rini . “ And Tiara . . ! “ says Mr . Bus . “ Oh yea , you can sit down with Handy ! “ order Mr . Bus . “ No , sir ! I’m coming from a rich people . How I could sit down with a poor person , like him ! “ insult Tiara . “ Alright ! Tiara . You may chose with whoever or wherever you wanna to sit ! “ says Mr . Bus . “ Ok , I’ve decided that I’m wanna sit down with someone named Elen ! “ says Tiara . “ What !! Elen now are sit with Lisa , how come you’ve saying something like that ?! “ ask Mr . Bus . “ What ! you dare to chase away me !! “ says Lisa mad . “ Enough , Lisa . Let’s she replace your place ! “ says Elen . “ What ! What happen to you , Elen ? you’ve so strange this day ! “ says Lisa . “ Hm , It must be that Tiara and her friends ,are the spies , which I mean ! “ says Erna on her own .
“ Excuse me , sir ! may I go to the bathroom ?! “ asking excuses . “ Yes , you may ! “ says Mr . Bus .
Finally , Handy was going on to the bathroom , in there .
“ Shit ! If she’s really here . I must be done for ! “ shit Handy .
“ Today Elen behavior is so strange . usually , she didn’t wanted Lisa to be replace by anyone , but now ?! “ says Handy . “ Oh , yea . I’m just remembered that Tiara have magical skill , whos tough by father . It must be Tiara’s whos behind this ! “ says Handy .
Suddenly Richard has come
“ What are you doing here , Handy ?! “ ask Richard . “ Richard , what are you doing here ?! “ ask Handy surprised . “ I’m just to find you , ‘cause you’ve been in bathroom twenty minutes already . Did something bother you , Handy ?! “ ask Richard . “ I’m just telling you’re a advice , don’t stay along with Tiara ! “ advice Handy . “ Why , she is beautiful and kind , right ?! “ ask Richard . “ You don’t understand her , do you ?! “ ask Handy . “ Not , but what are really happen , Handy ?! “ ask Richard . “ She is cunning , and evil . You know ! “ says Handy . “ What do you mean by that ?! “ ask Richard curiously . “ She have a hypnotic and other magical skill as well ! “ says Handy . “ What !! aren’t if so , she will became actor to we’re ours drama , few months later ! “ says Richard . “ Hufh ! “ Handy take a deep breath . “ You’ve known today , Elen has strange behavior than usual ?! “ ask Handy . “ Yes , I noticed that . She even drove Lisa away , just for Tiara ! “ says Richard . “ Yea , that’s right . I’m think that Elen has been hypnotized by Tiara ! “ says Handy curiously . “ It could happen . Better we’re report this to all of teacher ! “ order Richard . “ No , I don’t wanna , Tiara to drove away from this school ! “ says Handy . “ Why , why are you still care about her ?! “ ask Richard . “ Ask no more ! You’d better didn’t talking about it any longer ! Now we must back to classroom ! “ says Handy .
Meanwhile on Elen’s house .
“ Handy are Junior , I didn’t believe this !! “ says Astrid on her own heart .
“ I think the boys , must be in trouble . Better I’m trying to escape now ! I’ll untie this string and get out of here ! “ says Astrid on her own heart .
Meanwhile on classroom after the break bell tinkle .
“ Tiara , I wanna to talk to you , now ! Let’s us go to somewhere ! “ says Handy and then grab Tiara’s hand and together going to somewhere . “ What are you doing , Handy ?! “ ask Tiara irritated . “ Why are you’re here anyway ?! “ ask Handy irritated . “ What do you mean ? Of course , I wanna study and make a friends in this school ! “ says Tiara . “ If so . What’ve you’re doing to Elen , anyway ?! “ ask Handy irritating . “ What am I doing ? nothing ! I never to do anything to her , then ! “ says Tiara . “ I’ve know that you’re lying to me , Tiara . Actually what are you doing , to Elen , anyway ?!! “ ask Handy irritating . “ I’m just wanted to avenged to you , big brother ! “ says Tiara cold .
And then , Handy were roughed up by Tiara till his friends named Erna come and separates them .
“ Stop , stop ! What are both of you , here ? till you’re both fighting like this ! “ says Erna . “ I am just be grabbed by Handy , and he’s trying to robbed me up ! “ says Tiara frightened . “ No , don’t believe in her , Erna ! She’s so cunning ! “ says Handy . “ I’m just drop by here . When I was go to toilet , he’s tried to robbed me . So I’m trying to fighting him back ! “ says Tiara . “ You’re bitch , Tiara ! “ says Handy in harsh manner . “ That’s enough . Tiara you may go now ! “ says Erna . “ Ok ! “ answer Tiara and then left . “ Handy , I didn’t supposed you’ve would do that . I’m really unpleasant with you , Handy ! “ says Erna mad and then she’s leave . “ Erna , don’t believe her ! “ says Handy louder .
When Erna come out , Tiara come again .
“ How are you doing , Handy Junior . My big brother ?! “ mock Tiara . “ Tiara , why would you do all of this to me ! “ says Handy . “ Are it’s hurt , my brother ?! “ mock Tiara . “ Since I’m were child , you’ve been taugh me about being a gangstars , didn’t you ?! “ mock Tiara . “ And we’re fathers taugh me about using a magical skill , which not be taugh to you ! You’re so pitiful ! “ mock Tiara . “ I’m though that you’ll be walk in right place , and so the father think so too ! “ says Handy . “ I was . But you’ve been changed everything that I have , I love . You’re robbed them up , isn’t ?! “ ask Tiara mad . “ Aren’t it ‘cause you’ve think that I’m whos make our’s father dies ?! “ ask Handy . “ I’m not think anything like that . But I’m believe it ! “ says Tiara mad . “ Am I telling you once more , I’m aren’t reason whos make our’s father dies . “ says Handy . “ Now whos wanted to believe you , our’s mom , you’re friends , Elen , or anyone ?! “ ask Tiara mad . “ Damn ! So you’re actually whos hypnotic Elen , then ?! “ shit Handy . “ Yes , it’s me alright ! “ says Tiara . “ Damn , after this I’ll rough you up ! “ threat Handy . “ Hmp , with what . Even you’re not opponent to me ! “ mock Tiara . “ I’m not rough your up by punch , because we’re brothers . But I’ll roughed your up by kindliness ! “ says Handy confidently . “ Hmp , we’ll see ! “ says Tiara cold . “ Now , I’ll give you a opportunity to ask a question . Now what are you ask ?! “ mock Tiara . “ Oh well . How did you know that Elen burden up all of my secret ?! “ ask Handy . “ I’ve been told by Kevin ! “ says Tiara . “ What ! Kevin ?!! “ ask Handy surprised . “ Yea , Kevin is one of my subordinates ! Well then , I’ll going then ! “ says Tiara . “ Bye . . bye , brother ! “ farewell Tiara and then she leave . “ Wait Tiara . . wait !! “ says Handy louder .
“ Dad , what have I’m doing to you till my precious little sister hate me so much ! “ says Handy depressed .
And then Handy getting up and back to classroom again .
“ Where are you been , Handy ! It’s time for my lesson ?! “ ask Mr . Bus .
“ Oh , I’m just recently back from bathroom , sir ! “ says Handy .
“ Today , I will teach you , with ‘ Penginderaan Jauh ‘ often be called ‘ indraja ‘ ! says Mr . Bus .
“ But before that ! Let’s put you’re homework about ‘ Pembangunan berkelanjutan ‘ and ‘ struktur permukaan bumi ‘ in my cupboard now ! “ order Mr . Bus
“ Yes , sir ! “ says all of student .
Finally , they all have put their homework to teacher’s cup board and then the lesson began . after two hours passed
“ Ok , now . Our’s lesson began ! “ says Mr . Bus .
“ Yes , sir ! “ says all the students .
“ Ok . Now I’ll chose one of you to doing this work in front of class ! “ says Mr . Bus . “ Let’s me do it , sir ! “ says Ayu . “ No , not you , Ayu . You’ve often to doing this work in front of whiteboard . Let’s Tiara to doing the work in whiteboard ! “ says Mr . Bus . “ Yes , sir ! “ answer Tiara .
Few minutes later
“ Whao . That’s great , Tiara . You’re also smartest , really ! “ praise Mr . Bus .
“ She’s mind like our’s mom ! “ says  Handy on his own heart .
And then ninety minutes passed . finally all of students went home . On the way of going home , Ayu was surrounded by Danang , Ryan , and Farkan .
“ Danang , Ryan , and Farkan !! What are you doing here ?! “ ask Ayu surprised .
“ Oh , oh ! Ayu . Why are you always saying something like that to me ! “ mock Danang .
Suddenly Susi , Erna , Ratna , and of course Handy come .
“ Guys ! “ says Ayu surprised .
“ What are your doing here ?! “ mock Danang , Farkan , and Ryan .
“ We’ll stop you from doing anything to Ayu right now ! “ says Handy . “ Oh , are you sure ?! “ mock Danang . “ Yes , we’re sure ! “ says Handy and the others confidently . “ Who do you’re think you’re ?! “ mock Danang . “ I’m are Handy ! “ says Handy . “ Handy Junior , right ?! “ mock Tiara with come out . “ What !!! “ says all of man there . “ You’re , Junior then , right ?! “ ask Ayu nervous . “ Unfortunately , Yes ! “ says Handy . “ What’s !! That’s impossible ! “ says Susi surprised . “ If you don’t believe it , look insignia on his right hand ! “ says Tiara .
Finally , Susi open the Handy right hand , and found out the insignia of Junior .
“ What !! It’s true ! This insignia only Junior’s who have it ! “ says Susi really surprised .
“ Why , why are you Junior doing something like this ?! “ ask Ayu and the other upset . “ The reasons is simple . He’s wanted to get along with you , Ayu ! and of course , he’s wanted to secret his identity so I’m cannot find him ! “ says Tiara .
Suddenly Danang , Farkan , and Ryan run away .